Wednesday Homework

2022-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What would you wish for if you saw a falling star? A:I\'ll wish \'Please make everything\'s gonna be fine\'. I have some tests in school and also my mind is very complicated now, so I want everything to be fine. I don\'t want anything more then that.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I\'ll wish \'Please make everything\'s gonna be fine\'.

>> I\'ll wish, \"Please make everything fine\".
I have some tests in school and also my mind is very complicated now, so I want everything to be fine.

>> I have some tests in school and my mind is also very complicated now, so I want everything to be fine.
I don\'t want anything more then that.

>> I don\'t want anything more than that.

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