Wednesday Homework

2022-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q: What does a happy life look like? What would you need to do to be happy? A: For me, a happy life is a life which is quiet. I like quiet life because I don\'t need to meet a lot of people in my life if it\'s quiet. Also, I don\'t need to know more things if I\'m living a quiet life.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


For me, a happy life is a life which is quiet.

>> For me, a happy life is a life that is quiet.
I like quiet life because I don\'t need to meet a lot of people in my life if it\'s quiet.

>> I like a quiet life because I don\'t need to meet a lot of people in my life if it\'s quiet.
Also, I don\'t need to know more things if I\'m living a quiet life.

>> CORRECT!

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