Wednesday Homework

2022-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q: What kind of lifestyle does many want to have? A: I think it\'s usually the lifestyle which doing things anything I want. People think they want to do something almost every time, but they can\'t do everything they want because of others. So I think they would want the lifestyle doing things almost everything they want.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I think it\'s usually the lifestyle which doing things anything I want.
>> I think it\'s usually the lifestyle where they can do anything they want.
People think they want to do something almost every time, but they can\'t do everything they want because of others.
>> CORRECT!
So I think they would want the lifestyle doing things almost everything they want.
>> So I think they would want the lifestyle in which they could do almost everything they want.

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