Wednesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think it will depend on the person\'s characteristic.

>> CORRECT!
If a person can control him or her from playing or talking with his or her friends, then doing homework with friends will be better.

>> If a person can control himself or herself from playing or talking with his or her friends, then doing homework with friends will be better.
But if a person cannot control him or her from talking with his or her friends, then doing it alone will be better.

>> But if a person cannot control himself or herself from talking with his or her friends, then doing it alone will be better.