Wednesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

For now, I think humans too dependent on computers.

>> For now, I think humans are too dependent on computers.
Humans find information, entertainments, and make some files for work in computer.

>> Humans find information, entertainment, and make some files for work in the computer.
So, if the computers disappear, then people will suffer from stuffiness.

>> CORRECT!