Wednesday Homework

2022-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q: How can New Year\'s resolutions be a good opportunity for change? A: I think it would be a good opportunity only for the faithful people. Usually, unfaithful people don\'t keep the promise, so I think New Year\'s resolutions are not that good for them. But for the faithful people, they can keep the resolutions, and the small efforts that they did will change them a lot.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I think it would be a good opportunity only for the faithful people.
>> CORRECT!
Usually, unfaithful people don\'t keep the promise, so I think New Year\'s resolutions are not that good for them.
>> Usually, unfaithful people don\'t keep their promise, so I think New Year\'s resolutions are not that good for them.
But for the faithful people, they can keep the resolutions, and the small efforts that they did will change them a lot.
>> But for the faithful people, they can keep their resolutions and the small efforts that they made will change them a lot.

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