Wednesday Homework

2023-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q: Do you think people who exercise are happier than those who don’t? Why? A: I think people who exercise are happier than those who don\'t. If a person exercises, some hormones which makes the person feel better are created in his or her body. Also, if a person exercises, the blood flows better, so they can think well, and it can make them happy.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I think people who exercise are happier than those who don\'t.
>> CORRECT!
If a person exercises, some hormones which makes the person feel better are created in his or her body.
>> CORRECT!
Also, if a person exercises, the blood flows better, so they can think well, and it can make them happy.
>> Also, if a person exercises, the blood flows better, so they can think well and it can make them happy.

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