Wednesday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: If you are going to be a parent someday, will you make some rules for your children to follow? Why or why not?
A: If it\'s necessary to make rules, I will make them, but if they aren\'t, then I won\'t make them.
I think making rules for children can make the relationship worse than before, and it can give them pressure.
But if there isn\'t rules, then they could feel more free.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]. Happy Wednesday! Always look for how much progress can be made rather than perfection. Life will be a lot easier. ^^
A: If it\'s necessary to make rules, I will make them, but if they aren\'t, then I won\'t make them.
I think making rules for children can make the relationship worse than before, and it can give them pressure.
But if there isn\'t rules, then they could feel more free.
I think making rules for children can make the relationship worse than before, and it can give them pressure.
But if there isn\'t rules, then they could feel more free.
>>If it\'s necessary to make rules, I will make them, but if they aren\'t, then I won\'t. I think making rules for children can make the relationship worse than before, and it can give them under pressure. But if there aren\'t rules, then they could feel freer.
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