Wednesday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What are some ways to connect with others and build social support?
A: I think one way to connect with others and build social support is going out.
I think just going out can make the person to meet others, and I think it can connect the person with others.
And I think another way to do that is talking with others.
강사 첨삭
Happy Wednesday, [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework. I am well pleased to read your thoughts about it. Keep it up! ^^
~T. ELEA
A: I think one way to connect with others and build social support is going out. I think just going out can make the person to meet others, and I think it can connect the person with others. And I think another way to do that is talking with others.
>> I think one way to connect with others and build social support is going out. I think just going out can make the person meet others, and I think it can connect the person with others. And I think another way to do that is by talking with others.
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