Wednesday's Essay

Hi there :) Thank you for asking me everyday. And I always feel that my feeling is better after finising the class. In the morining, I feel down because I'm sleepy. But the talk with you wakes me up absolutely and makes me feel better. I think I'm really lucky to talk with you. It was little disappointed that I couldn't transfer my thoughts and opinions well. I will do it better next time! Take care :D <Essay> It seems that seasons that the best fashion comes out are spring and fall. During summer and winter, we should give up fashion for temperature. By the way, the more time is gone, the shorter spring and fall are, I think.

Hi there [이름]^^   How are you?^^ Your sentences are getting better and better! ^^ 95% Correct!^^ Thank you so much for the compliments. Some of my students call me an alarm clock because I always call them and wake them up with English conversations. hahahaha. I like doing that.^^ You always try your best and I do think that your writing is the best skill. You\'ll soon be very good in speaking. Just do not give up.^^ Take care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you: Hi there :)>> CORRECT OR> Hello there^^Thank you for asking me everyday. And I always feel that my feeling is better after finising the class. >> CORRECT OR> Thank you for always asking me and I feel much better after every class. In the morining, I feel down because I\'m sleepy. >> CORRECT OR> In the morning, I sometimes feel blue because I\'m sleepy.  But the talk with you wakes me up absolutely and makes me feel better. >> CORRECT OR> Having a conversation with you makes me alert and I feel better.^^  I think I\'m really lucky to talk with you.>> CORRECT OR> I feel lucky that I get to talk to you.It was little disappointed that I couldn\'t transfer my thoughts and opinions well. >> CORRECT OR> I feel down that I cannot express myself very well. I will do it better next time! >> CORRECT OR> I will be better next time.Take care :D>> CORRECT OR> Take lots of care.^^<Essay>It seems that seasons that the best fashion comes out are spring and fall. >> It seems the seasons that the best fashion comes out are spring and fall.  During summer and winter, we should give up fashion for temperature. >> CORRECT OR> In summer and winter, fashion does not really matter because of the temperature. By the way, the more time is gone, the shorter spring and fall are, I think. >> CORRECT Or> I think that as time passes by, Spring and Fall are getting shorter.