Week Review

2020-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

[Tuesday] I visited my grandmother\'s home. She lives in Hannam, Seoul. We bought a new fridge. It lasted for 30 years. Wearing Hanbok is a part of our culture. [Friday] I will go to my grandmother\'s house before my class. I will go to there before my class. For me, the best place I\'ve visited is within Korea. It was built in 1988. It\'s located in Seoul City. I need to have a passport when I travel abroad. -The End-

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday, [이름]!

The day\'s almost over. I hope you\'ll have a good Wednesday tomorrow.
Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.
Keep in mind all the rules/principles you\'re learning in class.
Good night!

__Teacher Mayleen :)


[Tuesday]
>>> [Wednesday]
I visited my grandmother\'s home.
>>> CORRECT
She lives in Hannam, Seoul.
>>> CORRECT
We bought a new fridge.
>>> CORRECT
It lasted for 30 years.
>>> CORRECT
Wearing Hanbok is a part of our culture.
>>> CORRECT

[Friday]
I will go to my grandmother\'s house before my class.
>>> CORRECT
I will go to there before my class.
>>> CORRECT
For me, the best place I\'ve visited is within Korea.
>>> CORRECT
It was built in 1988.
>>> CORRECT
It\'s located in Seoul City.
>>> CORRECT
I need to have a passport when I travel abroad.
>>> CORRECT

-The End-
>>> CORRECT (^_^)

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