weekend

2024-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

I have to prepare lots of side dishes for next week on the weekend. Sometimes I\'d like to relax, I can\'t enjoy resting for housework. Definitely I spend a lot of time cooking foe my family on the weekend.

강사 첨삭

Ms. [이름]!
I guess working moms don\'t have time to relax on weekends. We may be resting from our jobs but not our homes.
Thanks for thsi~
Aki~

I have to prepare lots of side dishes for next week on the weekend.
>>> CORRECT!

Sometimes I\'d like to relax, I can\'t enjoy resting for housework.
>>> Sometimes I\'d like to relax, I can\'t enjoy resting for housework.

Definitely, I spend a lot of time cooking for my family on the weekend.
>>> I spend a lot of time cooking for my family on the weekend.

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