weekend

2011-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

학생이 쓴 원문

In Korea, we don't work on saturday after 2 weeks. So I decided to watch Korean daramas during this weekend. I was recommended from my friend. The title is the queen of reverse. The drama has 31 and I watched 20. I wanted to watch all but I felt my eye sour so I gave up.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! I really appreciate your composition. Thank you for sharing your weekend story to me. Just take note of your sentence corrections. Thank you!T. Jessica

 

In Korea, we don't work on saturday after 2 weeks.

>>In Korea, we don’t work on Saturdays every after 2 weeks.

>>In Korea, we don’t work every other Saturdays.
So I decided to watch Korean daramas during this weekend.

>>So I decided to watch  Korean dramas during these weekends.
I was recommended from my friend.

>>It was recommended by my friend.
The title is the queen of reverse.

>>The title is ‘The Queen of Reverse.’
The drama has 31 and I watched 20.

>>The drama has 31 episodes and I already watched 20.
I wanted to watch all but I felt my eye sour so I gave up.

>>I wanted to watch all of it but I felt that my eyes were already sored, so I gave up.

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