Weekend

Yes, I sometimes spend time with my friends on weekends. But most of time, I spend time by myself. Since I live far from my family, It is difficult for me to stay with my family. I prefered spend time with my friends. But nowadays, I have changed my mind that I wanna spend more time with my family. Weekend is very important to all people. Since we work hard on weekdays, we need to rest and refresh on weekends. Yes I tend to make a plan ahead of weekends so that I have more quality time. But not all plan is kept.

Hello my dear [이름]

Thank you very much for sharing your composition. I really can feel how you value spending time with your  family.  You are absolutely right about planning ahead of time.  Keep up the good work and have a great day! 

Yes, I sometimes spend time with my friends on weekends.

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But most of time, I spend time by myself.

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>> But most of the time, I spend time by myself.

>>But most the time, I spend it alone.

Since I live far from my family, It is difficult for me to stay with my family.
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I prefered spend time with my friends.

>>I preferred spending time with my friends.
But nowadays, I have changed my mind that I wanna spend more time with my family.

>>But nowadays, I  changed my mind  and  I wanna spend more time with my family.
Weekend is very important to all people.
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Since we work hard on weekdays, we need to rest and refresh on weekends.
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Yes I tend to make a plan ahead of weekends so that I have more quality time.

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But not all plan is kept.

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