Weekend
학생이 쓴 원문
My wife and I went to a cafeteria which was broadcast in a TV program. One of the member of the famous idol group, ARASHI, visited there so my wife wanted to visiter there too. We enjoyed the meal and the coffee and came back home enjoying the white landscape covered by the snow.
강사 첨삭
Amazing weekend!!!^_^
>> My wife and I went to a cafeteria which was in a broadcast in a TV program.
One of the member of the famous idol group, ARASHI, visited there so my wife wanted to visiter there too.
>> One of the member of the famous idol group, ARASHI, visited this place, so my wife wanted to visit it too.
We enjoyed the meal and the coffee and came back home enjoying the white landscape covered by the snow.
>> We enjoyed the meal and the coffee. We went home enjoying the white landscape covered by the snow.
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