Weekend activities
학생이 쓴 원문
Weekend activities I usually do are divided into when I go out and when I don\'t go out. When I go out, I hang out with my friends in downtown, and when I don\'t go out, I watch TV or YouTube at home and turn up the song all day long. And I take a light walk.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^ Thank you for doing your homework. I am so glad that you always have a great weekend! Anyway, keep up the good work and study well. ♥T.Gelly
Weekend activities I usually do are divided into when I go out and when I don\'t go out.
>> The weekend activities I usually do are divided into two, when I go out and when I don\'t go out.
When I go out, I hang out with my friends in downtown, and when I don\'t go out, I watch TV or YouTube at home and turn up the song all day long.
>> When I go out, I hang out with my friends downtown, and when I don\'t go out, I just watch TV or YouTube at home and turn up the song all day long.
And I take a light walk.
>> And sometimes, I take a light walk.
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