Weekend night skiing
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One of my hobbies is skiing. I started to do ski since about 15 years ago, but just began to take lessons since last April.
I used to ski on my own style but one day, one of my friends who used to ski together, took a video of my skiing down the slope, and showed it to me. It was so awkward and looked very clumsy and not nice . So I decided to take a ski lesson and have been taking it since last April.
And it was my first skiing last Sunday for this ski season. It was awesome. I got training every Tuesday and Thursday in an indoor ski but skiing on the snow feels sooooooooo much better and gives such a healing energy.
My boy friend came along with me to the ski resort, and he does snowboarding. He said it\'s been almost 12. 13years since he stopped going to ski resort, was kind of nervous and excited. He was okay with fitting himself to the snowboarding but he looked kind of frustrated because he probably was able to do better but now it got a lot rusty so he couldn\'t show his skill
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