weekend plan

2010-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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I don’t have any special plan for this weekend. Maybe I’ll get up very late tomorrow, and I’ll go shopping with my mom. (my friend’s wedding is scheduled for three consecutive weeks. But I don’t have suitable clothes for ceremony. So I have a plan a buy some clothes for ceremony and fall.) And I’ll meet my boyfriend on Sunday. Because we rarely meet during weekday, we try to have a conversation about us on weekend. I feel that passing time on weekend is so fast. So I’m getting depressed as time is passed on Sunday night. Anyway have a great weekend~ ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Weekend usually pass by really fast when you don't want it to end..  So I hope you will have blast this weekend!

Anyway, I have a few corrections for you on your composition.

Verna

 

I don't have any special plan for this weekend.

>> Correct
Maybe I'll get up very late tomorrow, and I'll go shopping with my mom.

>> Correct
(my friend's wedding is scheduled for three consecutive weeks. But I don't have suitable clothes for ceremony. So I have a plan a buy some clothes for ceremony and fall.)

>> (my friend's wedding is scheduled in three weeks. But I don't have suitable clothes for the ceremony. So I have a plan to buy some clothes for the ceremony and fall.)
And I'll meet my boyfriend on Sunday. Because we rarely meet during weekday, we try to have a conversation about us on weekend.

>>  And I'll meet my boyfriend on Sunday. Because we rarely meet during weekdays, we try to have a conversation about us on weekend.
I feel that passing time on weekend is so fast. So I'm getting depressed as time is passed on Sunday night.

>> I feel that time passes so fast on weekend. So I'm getting depressed as time passed by on Sunday night.
Anyway have a great weekend~ ^^

>> Correct

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