Weekend Plan
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I will be very busy this weekend. First of all, I have a concert tonight. I feel excited and a little nervous. I want to perform the concert well. Second, I have an assignment. I have to read an article which reaches about 40 pages and write a simple essay in English until Sunday midnight. It is about INNOVATION, ENTERPRENUERSHIP and POLICY and it is difficult to understand it. Last, I have a blind dating with my two friends at Sunday night. We will meet three boys who are friends of my friend. I think we will go to pub and talk each other.
Anyway, I have been taken your class for about 1 month, and it was very funny and useful. I think I’m improving. I want to learn English more with you. Thank you very much. =)
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I am glad that you are having fun in class with me. I also am having fun during our classes. You seem to make me happy everyday. I hope we could still continue having classes together.
Wow! Your weekend is busy indeed. But I hope that you enjoy it and tell me all about it on Monday.That is a very long article that you have to read. Well, I hope I could be of help to anything. Just tell me if you need any help with it. Okay? Oh! You’re going to have a blind date on Sunday well I hope it will turn out fine and that you will enjoy it.
T.Faye
Here are some corrections:
I think I will be very busy this weekend.
>>Correct!
First of all, I have a concert tonight.
>>Correct!
I feel excited and a little nervous.
>>Correct!
I want to perform the concert well.
>>I want to perform well in the concert.
Second, I have an assignment.
>>Correct!
I have to read an article which reaches about 40 pages and write a simple essay in English until Sunday midnight.
>>I have to read a 40 page article and I should write a simple essay in English until Sunday midnight.
It is about INNOVATION, ENTERPRENUERSHIP and POLICY and it is difficult to understand it.
>>Correct!
Last, I have a blind dating with my two friends at Sunday night.
>>Lastly, I have a blind date with two of my friends on Sunday night.
We will meet three boys who are friends of my friend.
>>Correct!
I think we will go to pub and talk each other.
>>I think we will go to a pub and talk with each other. Anyway, I have been taken your class for about 1 month, and it was very funny and useful.
>>Anyway, I have been taking classes with you for a month now and it’s fun and useful.
I think I’m improving.
>>Correct!
I want to learn English more with you.
>>Correct!
Thank you very much. =)
>>Correct!
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