Weekend Plan

2011-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

I think I will be very busy this weekend. First of all, I have a concert tonight. I feel excited and a little nervous. I want to perform the concert well. Second, I have an assignment. I have to read an article which reaches about 40 pages and write a simple essay in English until Sunday midnight. It is about INNOVATION, ENTERPRENUERSHIP and POLICY and it is difficult to understand it. Last, I have a blind dating with my two friends at Sunday night. We will meet three boys who are friends of my friend. I think we will go to pub and talk each other. Anyway, I have been taken your class for about 1 month, and it was very funny and useful. I think I’m improving. I want to learn English more with you. Thank you very much. =)

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!             I am glad that you are having fun in class with me. I also am having fun during our classes. You seem to make me happy everyday. I hope we could still continue having classes together.             Wow! Your weekend is busy indeed. But I hope that you enjoy it and tell me all about it on Monday.That is a very long article that you have to read. Well, I hope I could be of help to anything. Just tell me if you need any help with it. Okay? Oh! You’re going to have a blind date on Sunday well I hope it will turn out fine and that you will enjoy it. T.Faye Here are some corrections: I think I will be very busy this weekend. >>Correct!  First of all, I have a concert tonight. >>Correct! I feel excited and a little nervous. >>Correct! I want to perform the concert well. >>I want to perform well in the concert. Second, I have an assignment. >>Correct! I have to read an article which reaches about 40 pages and write a simple essay in English until Sunday midnight. >>I have to read a 40 page article and I should write a simple essay in English until Sunday midnight.  It is about INNOVATION, ENTERPRENUERSHIP and POLICY and it is difficult to understand it. >>Correct! Last, I have a blind dating with my two friends at Sunday night. >>Lastly, I have a blind date with two of my friends on Sunday night.  We will meet three boys who are friends of my friend. >>Correct!  I think we will go to pub and talk each other. >>I think we will go to a pub and talk with each other. Anyway, I have been taken your class for about 1 month, and it was very funny and useful. >>Anyway, I have been taking classes with you for a month now and it’s fun and useful. I think I’m improving. >>Correct!  I want to learn English more with you. >>Correct! Thank you very much. =) >>Correct!

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