Weekend plans
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I planned to practice the interview for Delloite. I believe the experience of my sales career, but it still makes me nervous. the interview might be different from the work because I should sell my self in front of my future bosses. And then I will meet with my ex-colleague for dinner and get some advice for the interview.
강사 첨삭
I planned to practice the interview for Delloite.
>> OR: I was planning to practice the interview for Delloite.
I believe the experience of my sales career, but it still makes me nervous.
>> I believe in the experience of my sales career, but it still makes me nervous.
the interview might be different from the work because I should sell my self in front of my future bosses.
>> CORRECT
And then I will meet with my ex-colleague for dinner and get some advice for the interview.
>> And then I will meet with my former colleague for dinner and get some advice for the interview.
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