weekend routine
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Our family have own time on weekend. Our family usually do the things which we couldn\'t do on weekday or we want. and most of us are not outgoing people so we rarely go out and drive freely if we don\'t have things to do. But dinner time, we talk and look back up and advise freely about our this week. And i sometimes watch movie and sleep early for better next week.
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Good morning, Stella ^^
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Our family have own time on weekend.
>> On the weekends, our family has free time.
Our family usually do the things which we couldn\'t do on weekday or we want.
>> Usually, our family does things that we either want to do or couldn\'t do during the workweek.
and most of us are not outgoing people so we rarely go out and drive freely if we don\'t have things to do.
>> And because most of us are not outgoing, we rarely go out and drive freely if we don\'t have something else to do.
But dinner time, we talk and look back up and advise freely about our this week.
>> But at dinnertime, we talk and look back up, freely advising each other about our week.
And i sometimes watch movie and sleep early for better next week.
>>Sometimes, I watch a movie and go to bed early in preparation for a better week.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.