Weightlifting in Tokyo Olympics
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Diaz who is a Weightlifting player got a gold medal in Tokyo Olympics.
I watched her on TV. She defeated China player.
She is a great woman in your country.
Congratulation!!!
I knew your country will get a medal it this Olympics.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thank you for telling me about this great news. Let\'s talk in a bit ^^
T. DON
Dear [Name],
Diaz who is a Weightlifting player got a gold medal in Tokyo Olympics.
>> CORRECT
I watched her on TV. She defeated China player.
>> I watched her on TV. She defeated a Chinese athlete.
She is a great woman in your country.
>> CORRECT
Congratulation!!!
>> Congratulations!!!
I knew your country will get a medal it this Olympics.
>> CORRECT
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