Welcome to HYT sales department.
학생이 쓴 원문
Date : 5, April, 2024
To : Wendy Baker
Cc : Mr. [Name] : Welcome to HYT sales department.
Hello, I\'m JinTae Lee from HYT HR department.
HYT is Welcome to your entering this company.
You would incharge of sales for Europe regions.
Mr. [Name] who is your co-worker will help you anytime.
HYT trusts your successful career in a HYT.
[이름] LEE, Manger of HYT HR Division.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Great job on the emails. Keep it up!
~~Teacher Ryka^^
Date : 5, April, 2024
>> CORRECT
To : Wendy Baker
>> CORRECT
Cc : Mr. [Name]
>> CORRECT
Subject : Welcome to HYT sales department.
>> Subject: Welcome to HYT Sales Department
Dear [Name],
Hello, I\'m JinTae Lee from HYT HR department.
>> I am [Name] Lee from HYT HR Department.
HYT is Welcome to your entering this company.
>> On behalf of HYT, I extend a warm welcome to you as you join our company.
You would incharge of sales for Europe regions.
>> You will be in charge of sales for the European regions, and
Mr. [Name] who is your co-worker will help you anytime.
>> Mr. [Name], your co-worker, will be available to assist you whenever needed.
HYT trusts your successful career in a HYT.
>> We trust in your ability to have a successful career with HYT.
[이름] LEE, Manger of HYT HR Division.
[이름] LEE, Manger of HYT HR Division.
>> Best regards,
[이름] Lee
Manager, HYT HR Division
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