welfare
학생이 쓴 원문
We are mistaken that it is fair if everyone receive the same welfare benefits.
This is a big fault about democracy.
We recently fall into misconception about democracy and welfare in Korea.
One example phenomenon of these is many people only requre their rights without doing obligations.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
Many people take advantage of opportunities that are in front of them. Is it being greed or taking someone\'s rights? Well, we really don\'t know because if a person is offered something \"free\" our initial reaction is to take it. Then who is at fault? the person giving or receiving it? I guess, even in this kind of matter, the government must have a proper judgment
See you!
Aki~
We are mistaken that it is fair if everyone receive the same welfare benefits.
>>> We are mistaken in that it is fair if everyone receives the same welfare benefits.
This is a big fault about democracy.
>>> This is a big fault of democracy.
We recently fall into misconception about democracy and welfare in Korea.
>>> We recently fell into a misconception about democracy and welfare in Korea.
One example phenomenon of these is many people only requre their rights without doing obligations.
>>> One example of this phenomenon is many people only require their rights without doing obligations.
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