welfare system
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently my country try to support and establish for welfare system.
One example is about parenting like parental leave, maternity leave and daily parenting time .
We can\'t help but get angry when some fabricate and neglect their work.
Even me, I feel upset when some teachers use daily parenting time and lazy their work.
Some people abuse the good system and selfish without conscience.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
Oh, that\'s sad to hear. Do you know any reasons why they have to do that even if the government has already set a policy about parental leave?
See you!
Aki~
Recently my country try to support and establish for welfare system.
>>> Recently, my country has tried to support and establish for welfare system.
One example is about parenting, like parental leave, maternity leave, and daily parenting time .
>>> CORRECT!
We can\'t help but get angry when some fabricate and neglect their work.
>>> CORRECT!
Even me, I feel upset when some teachers use daily parenting time and lazy their work.
>>> Even me I feel upset when some teachers use daily parenting time and get lazy with their work.
Some people abuse the good system and selfish without conscience.
>>> Some people abuse the good system and are selfish without conscience.
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