Well, I can say great weather today. ^^;
학생이 쓴 원문
> How would you describe a perfect weather?
Well, I can say great weather today. ^^;
\" Today weather is very nice isn\'t it? I can feel very clean air. Sky is very high without cloud. And wind is very soft with good fragrance. The temperature is warm. This weather makes me refresh. This weather makes me curing from life stress.\"
강사 첨삭
Hell Sir JY! Seems like a good description of spring or fall season.
- T. Beth
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>>> Well, I can say it\'s a great weather today.
\" Today weather is very nice isn\'t it?
>>> \" Today\'s weather is very nice, isn\'t it?
I can feel very clean air.
>>> I can feel a very clean air.
Sky is very high without cloud.
>>> The sky is very high without clouds.
And wind is very soft with good fragrance.
>>> Moreover, the wind is very soft with good fragrance.
The temperature is warm.
>>> correct
This weather makes me refresh.
>>> This weather makes me feel refreshed.
>>> OR: This weather gives a refreshing feeling.
This weather makes me curing from life stress.\"
>>> This weather makes me relieved from life\'s stress.\"
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