well... I think the most important when we choose the hobby
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is that how much to assist our happy life or how much fun to give to us when we are doing that
It is best that that is having a two advantage.
and I also think I hope that I learn something while I\'m doing that for my life
that is can be anything like learning skill or knowledge.. but that should be not dangerous.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your answer.
I agree that we should choose hobbies that are good and will make us happy. ^^
I also appreciate it that you always want to learning something new.
I think it\'s a good way of living. ^^
Anyway, I hope that you will have a good night!
Take care and enjoy the weekend.
~Teacher Gina
>> Well, I think the most important when we choose a hobby is how much it assists our happy life or how much fun it can give us when we are doing that.
It is best that that is having a two advantage.
>> It is best having two advantages.
and I also think I hope that I learn something while I\'m doing that for my life
and I also think I hope that I learn something while I\'m doing that for my life
>> CORRECT.
that is can be anything like learning skill or knowledge.. but that should be not dangerous.
that is can be anything like learning skill or knowledge.. but that should be not dangerous.
>> That can be anything like learning a skill or knowledge but that should not be dangerous.
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