Welsh corgi!

2012-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Meg

학생이 쓴 원문

l like pet very much! My favorite pet is puppy! And My favorite puppy is Welsh corgi! Its body is very long and its feets are very tiny! It is so cute~♡ If you search the Welsh corgi, you will love it^^

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear! Hapy, happy Monday to you.^^ I\'m glad to read your composition homework once again. I have made some necessary corrections in your homework so that you can improve your English ability further and faster. Kindly read and analyze them. Please try using these expressions in appropriate situations. Take care and I\'ll call you again very, very soon. ~Teacher Meg l like pet very much! >>I like my pet very much!My favorite pet is puppy!And My favorite puppy is Welsh corgi! >>My favorite pet is a puppy, specifically a Welsh corgi!Its body is very long and its feets are very tiny! >>Its body is very long and its feet are very tiny.It is so cute~ >>CORRECT! =)If you search the Welsh corgi, you will love it^^ >>If you search for the Welsh corgi and find it, I\'m sure you will love it.^^

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