wendy

2011-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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Wendy It was a nice time. I'll read second aticle at The korean Times. First one and third one are not a good news. As you said, I'll try to avoid a bad news. So we 'll talk about second topic tomorrow. and I would like to discuss something. If there are not a news which I want to read or discuss, except news at The Korean Times, do you have another aticle ? Anyway, thank you. Good night.

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Hi there [이름], I'm really sorry about the interuptions a while back.I usually get topics from at http://www.esldiscussions.com/. I just try to choose a topic and the questions are there. Have a good night. Here are some corrections: It was a nice time. >>CORRECTI'll read second aticle at The korean Times. >>I'll read the second article in The Korean Times.First one and third one are not a good news. >>CORRECT or First and second articles are bad news.As you said, I'll try to avoid a bad news. >>CORRECT So we 'll talk about second topic tomorrow. >>So we'll talk about the second topic tomorrow.and I would like to discuss something. >>CORRECTIf there are not a news which I want to read or discuss, >>If there are no news which I want to read or discussexcept news at The Korean Times, do you have another aticle ? >>article/CORRECTAnyway, thank you. Good night. >>CORRECT

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