wendy
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Wendy
It was a nice time.
I'll read second aticle at The korean Times.
First one and third one are not a good news.
As you said, I'll try to avoid a bad news.
So we 'll talk about second topic tomorrow.
and I would like to discuss something.
If there are not a news which I want to read or discuss,
except news at The Korean Times, do you have another aticle ?
Anyway, thank you. Good night.
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Hi there [이름], I'm really sorry about the interuptions a while back.I usually get topics from at http://www.esldiscussions.com/. I just try to choose a topic and the questions are there. Have a good night.
Here are some corrections:
It was a nice time.
>>CORRECTI'll read second aticle at The korean Times.
>>I'll read the second article in The Korean Times.First one and third one are not a good news.
>>CORRECT or First and second articles are bad news.As you said, I'll try to avoid a bad news.
>>CORRECT So we 'll talk about second topic tomorrow.
>>So we'll talk about the second topic tomorrow.and I would like to discuss something.
>>CORRECTIf there are not a news which I want to read or discuss,
>>If there are no news which I want to read or discussexcept news at The Korean Times, do you have another aticle ?
>>article/CORRECTAnyway, thank you. Good night.
>>CORRECT
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