Went back to old church.

2019-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

Last Sunday I went to church back. And everyone greeted me. But the church\'s situation wasn\'t good. Many people were out and the church was really quiet. My church is 4story-buildings. But people in church was just around 40people. I was a little sad. In worship time, my missionary gave some speech to us. And he said we are going to go to LotteWorld on April. I can\'t see people who I known for a long time so I was a little sad. But I learned how to play the guitar first from brother and english class will be restart. There was a sad news and happy news last wekend. I don\'t know when does the church will sold or out but it was really sad news to many people and me.

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Last Sunday I went to church back. And everyone greeted me. But the church\'s situation wasn\'t good.

>> Last Sunday, I went back to church and everyone greeted me. But the church\'s situation isn\'t good.

Many people were out and the church was really quiet. My church is 4story-buildings. But people in church was just around 40people.

>> Many people left and the church was really quiet. My church is a four-story building but there were just around 40 people last Sunday.

I was a little sad.

>> Correct

In worship time, my missionary gave some speech to us. And he said we are going to go to LotteWorld on April.

>> During the worship time, our missionary gave a speech and said that we are going to Lotte World on April.

I can\'t see people who I known for a long time so I was a little sad. But I learned how to play the guitar first from brother and english class will be restart.

>> I didn\'t see the people whom I have known for a long time so, I was a little sad. I learned how to play the guitar for the first time from a brother and the English class will restart.

There was a sad news and happy news last wekend.

>> There was a sad and a happy news last weekend.

I don\'t know when does the church will sold or out but it was really sad news to many people and me.

>> I don\'t know when the building will be taken and when are we going to have move out. It was a really sad news to many people and me.

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