went to grandma house
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to the grandma's house.I played a lot at my grandmother's house.I watched Tv and played games.And I did my homework.I didn't study science very much.And I got a bad score in test.It was a good time.I think science is really hard.I can't concentrate studying science.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I know you can do it!
You are a smart student and I believe in your abilities.
Maybe that\'s the reason why you feel bad today. You got a bad score.
I think the best thing to do is to study Science harder.
See you on Thursday!
_Teacher Dianne
I went to the grandma\'s house.
>> I went to my grandmother\'s house.
I played a lot at my grandmother\'s house.
>> Correct
I watched Tv and played games.
>> I watched TV and played games.
And I did my homework.
>> I also did my homework.
I didn\'t study Science very much.
>> Correct
>> Or: I didn\'t study Science very hard.
And I got a bad score in test.
>> And I got a bad score in the test.
It was a good time.
>> Correct
I think science is really hard.
>> Correct
I can\'t concentrate studying science.
>> Correct
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