went to grandma house

2016-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I went to the grandma's house.I played a lot at my grandmother's house.I watched Tv and played games.And I did my homework.I didn't study science very much.And I got a bad score in test.It was a good time.I think science is really hard.I can't concentrate studying science.

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Hi, [이름]!   I know you can do it! You are a smart student and I believe in your abilities. Maybe that\'s the reason why you feel bad today. You got a bad score. I think the best thing to do is to study Science harder. See you on Thursday!   _Teacher Dianne   I went to the grandma\'s house. >> I went to my grandmother\'s house. I played a lot at my grandmother\'s house. >> Correct I watched Tv and played games. >> I watched TV and played games. And I did my homework. >> I also did my homework. I didn\'t study Science very much. >> Correct >> Or: I didn\'t study Science very hard. And I got a bad score in test. >> And I got a bad score in the test. It was a good time. >> Correct I think science is really hard. >> Correct I can\'t concentrate studying science. >> Correct

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