wetting.

2010-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 michaelA

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it makes me uncomfortable during this morning. my suit are dried. but my shoes are still wet. so i have to wear safty shoes instead of my shoes. it is heavy one. because it covered with steel at its upside for protecting my foot from falling heavy dangerous things. i wear this shoes when i go to the dangerous place in our company. i am wearing my slipper in my office. but i have to change my shoes to saftey shoes at lunch time. inspite of the canteen is not dangerous place.k k k

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it makes me uncomfortable during this morning.  >>it made me uncomfortable the whole morning. my suit are dried.  >>my suit is now dry. but my shoes are still wet.  >>correct^^ so i have to wear safty shoes instead of my shoes.  >>so I have to wear safety shoes instead of the regular shoes. it is heavy one.  >>It is heavy. because it covered with steel at its upside for protecting my foot from falling heavy dangerous things.>>because it was covered with steel and the upper portion can protect my foot from things that may fall. i wear this shoes when i go to some dangerous places in our company.>>correct^^ i am wearing my slipper in my office.  >>correct^^ but i have to change my shoes to safety shoes at lunch time.  >>correct^^ inspite of the canteen is not dangerous place.k k k >>even if the canteen is not a dngerous place.    

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