Whai is your nationality?
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My nationality is Korea.
We tend to think nationality important in Korean society.
But nowdays I don\'t think nationality as important as in the past.
Because the society that I live in seems more meaningful than nationality.
There are many students of diverse nationality in our school.
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Whai is your nationality?
My nationality is Korea.
>>My nationality is Korean.
We tend to think nationality important in Korean society.
We tend to think nationality important in Korean society.
>>We tend to think that one\'s nationality is important in the Korean society.
But nowdays I don\'t think nationality as important as in the past.
But nowdays I don\'t think nationality as important as in the past.
>>But, nowadays, I don\'t think that one\'s nationality is as important as in the past.
Because the society that I live in seems more meaningful than nationality.
Because the society that I live in seems more meaningful than nationality.
>>Because, the society where I live in, should be much more meaningful than one\'s nationality.
There are many students of diverse nationality in our school.
There are many students of diverse nationality in our school.
>>There are many students of diverse nationalities in our school.
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