Whale singing
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Ye/,they would make some noise just like singing. So they will communicate with other whales by singing. In documentary, I saw they are singing. They sing when they seek their partner or babies.
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Hi [이름] [이름]!^^
I also believe that whales can sing.
Whales are wonderful creatures.
They may not say the lyrics of their song but the sound they make is really interesting.
Andrea
Ye/,they would make some noise just like singing.
>> Yes, they make some sounds that seems as if they are singing.
So they will communicate with other whales by singing.
>> They can communicate with the other whales by singing.
In documentary, I saw they are singing.
>> I watched from a documentary that they are singing.
They sing when they seek their partner or babies.
>> Correct
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