Whant do you usually do when your bossis not around and you have to ask something important?

2020-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Dear [Name], I send a message by mobil phone. I can not call my boss, because of my english ability. sometimes I didn\'t understand his pronounciation. that is why I learn english.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]. Thanks for your efforts on doing your homework. You did great. -T. Jasper

Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name],

I send a message by mobil phone. 
>> CORRECT; but the spelling of \"mobil\" is mobile.

I can not call my boss, because of my english ability. 
>> CORRECT; but you should remove the \",\" and the spelling of \"english\" should be English.
>> I can not call my boss because of my English ability.

sometimes I didn\'t understand his pronounciation.
>> Sometimes I don\'t understand his pronunciation.

that is why I learn english
>> That is why I am learning English.

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