what a happy day!
학생이 쓴 원문
today in university.
I had joinded to discussion with my professor about how will be effect
the earthquake to japan's economic.
when i read one of the article which someone expert'opinion that is
good effect to japan's economic by earthquake
but i can not understand. because at the article,
the expert who said japan's exconomic have a positive effect
by earthquake had a logic that
japan had a longest recession long time ago until now
so that break this situation they have a powerfull shock.
and this shcck is good to world ecconomic because for recover
S.O.C which had ordinary condition before earthquake japan use
a lot of money. so so many country had a good opportunity their business.
also i cannot agree above expert's opinion. continuing
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
I am really sad to hear about what happened to Japan. I also don’t think that it will cause a positive effect to the economy around the world. They couldn’t expect the people to easily adjust to the situation it should take time. Well, maybe they should have thought about the consequences so that the economy would not have a hard time in dealing with situations such as this one. This will really have a great effect in the world. But I hope that they would be able to resolve this issue.
T.Faye
Here are some corrections:
today in university.>>Today in the University,I had joinded to discussion with my professor about how will be effect the earthquake to japan's economic.>>I joined in a discussion with my professor about how will the earthquake affect Japan’s economy.when i read one of the article which someone expert'opinion that is good effect to japan's economic by earthquake but i can not understand.
>>Because I’ve read an article written by an expert, his opinion was that the earthquake has a good effect on Japan’s economy but, I cannot understand why.
because at the article, the expert who said japan's exconomic have a positive effect by earthquake had a logic that japan had a longest recession long time ago until now so that break this situation they have a powerfull shock.>>In the article, The expert had a logic that Japan had a long recession that it is still going on until now gave a powerful shock to the people.
and this shcck is good to world ecconomic because for recover S.O.C which had ordinary condition before earthquake japan use a lot of money.
>>He also said that this shock is good for the world’s economy, because of the recovering of the S.O.C that it has an ordinary condition before the earthquake and that Japan has lost a lot of money.
so so many country had a good opportunity their business.>>So many countries has a good opportunity for their business.also i cannot agree above expert's opinion.
>>I cannot agree to his opinion.
Continuing.
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