What a lucky day?
학생이 쓴 원문
The day before yesterday was a lucky day.
I finally passed the test.
Also, I got new friends and a teacher.
I was really happy that I am in 6th grade.
My teacher and new students were nice to me.
The funny thing was that 3 more students came to our class.
Maybe, my class was good class.
However, I already knew some students since I was in 4th and 5th grade!!
For last one of them was a my best friend.
I was happy about it so, when I don't know about our class, he could tell me what to do.
강사 첨삭
Wow! It does sound like a lucky day! Congratulations for getting in to the 6th grade. I hope you get to maintain good grades. Here are your corrections- Teacher JM
The day before yesterday was a lucky day.
>>>The other day was a lucky day.
I finally passed the test.
>>>Correct
Also, I got new friends and a teacher.
>>>I also got new friends and a new teacher.I was really happy that I am in 6th grade.
>>>I am really happy that I am in the 6th grade.My teacher and new students were nice to me.
>>>My teacher and new classmates were nice to me.The funny thing was that 3 more students came to our class.
>>>CorrectMaybe, my class was good class.
>>>Maybe my class was good class.However, I already knew some students since I was in 4th and 5th grade!!
>>>Anyway, there were some students who i already knew since I was in 4th and 5th grade!!For last one of them was a my best friend.
>>>Surprisingly, one of them was my best friend.I was happy about it so, when I don't know about our class, he could tell me what to do.
>>>I was happy about it. And now, when I don't know something about our class, he could tell me what to do
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