What a supervisor need to be

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A supervisor is an important role in a group.

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>>Being a supervisor is the most important role in a group. 

There are a few qualities that a supervisor need to have.

>>There are a few qualities that a supervisor needs to have.

First, supervisors need to have an excellent communication skill.

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They have to interact with employees.

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>>They need to interact with their employees.

Communication is the best way to intercat with others.

>>Communication is the best way to build good relationship with them.

They need to listen carefully what the employees say and talk to each other specially when they have problems between them.

>>They need to listen carefully on the employees opinion especially when there is a problem.

Next, knowleage in their industry is required for supervisors.

>>Secondly, supervisors should be knowledgeable in their industry/field.

It is one of the responsibility for supervisors to train their employees.

>>One of the responsibilities of supervisors is to train their employees.

Then, they need to have organizational skills. One of their job is to assign the task.

>>They also have to have organizational skills to delegate the tasks to their employees.