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I used to work in car maintenance shop before learning welding. But it was low salary. So I started to learn welding 6 years ago. It was hard to learn for me. To work as a welder, all welder must pass the 6G(inclined position) test. I tried to the test many times. Finally, I got the welding licences and currently I am working on construction site as a welder.
Also I am planning to immigrate to Canada. It is my purpose that getting the permanent residency for my family. I will do my best for my plan.
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Hello Andy. Happy Monday! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this topic. ^_^
T. Irene
I used to work in car maintenance shop before learning welding.
>>> I used to work in A car maintenance shop before learning welding.
But it was low salary.
>>> But the salary was low.
So I started to learn welding 6 years ago.
>>> So I learned welding 6 years ago.
It was hard to learn for me. To work as a welder, all welder must pass the 6G(inclined position) test.
>>> It was hard for me because all welders must pass the 6G(inclined position) test.
I tried to the test many times.
>>> I took the test so many times.
Finally, I got the welding licenses and currently I am working on construction site as a welder.
>>> Finally, I got the welding license and currently, I am working in a construction site as a welder.
Also, I am planning to immigrate to Canada.
>>> Finally, I got the welding license and currently, I am working in a construction site as a welder.
Also, I am planning to immigrate to Canada.
>>> Correct.
It is my purpose that getting the permanent residency for my family.
>>> My purpose is to get a permanent resident visa for my family.
I will do my best for my plan.
>>> Correct.
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