What actions are friendly?
학생이 쓴 원문
It depends on a person\'s characteristics. I define being friendly as the attitude or behavior an individual likes so that being friendly can be treated differently from person to person. Some people recognize staying with themselves for a long time as friendly, while others prefer someone who speaks kindly. For me, someone talking kindly and showing the attitude of listening carefully can be friendly. In this regard, I get along with people who do such actions whenever meeting me. Also, I try to do so to whoever I meet because treating someone sincerely is one of my life mottoes.
강사 첨삭
I really like your point here, Shine! May you always show a friendly attitude towards others in order to see you as a good role model.-Faith-
It depends on a person\'s characteristics. >> CORRECT
I define being friendly as the attitude or behavior an individual likes so that being friendly can be treated differently from person to person.
>> I define being friendly as the attitude or behavior an individual likes so being friendly can be treated differently from person to person.
Some people recognize staying with themselves for a long time as friendly, while others prefer someone who speaks kindly.
>> Some recognize that people staying with them for a long time is friendly, while others prefer someone who speaks kindly.
For me, someone talking kindly and showing the attitude of listening carefully can be friendly.
>> CORRECT
In this regard, I get along with people who do such actions whenever meeting me.
>> In this regard, I get along with people who do such actions whenever I meet me.
Also, I try to do so to whoever I meet because treating someone sincerely is one of my life mottoes.
>> Also, I try to do such to whomever I meet because treating someone sincerely is one of my life mottoes.
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