What activities are you most looking forward to during this May 1st holiday?

2024-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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My only activity is graduate studies. I have a lot of homework and final exams waiting for me. And at 9:30 p.m., I plan to meet with graduate school team members and have a group study via Zoom. So, I will spend all day preparing research for the zoom meeting.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!^^
Your schedule sounds busy! It\'s great that you\'re dedicating time to your studies and collaborating with your team for group study sessions. Good luck with your research and upcoming exams!
~Kelly
My only activity is graduate studies.
>> Correct
OR:
>> Graduate studies are my sole focus at the moment.
I have a lot of homework and final exams waiting for me.
>> Correct
OR:
>> I have a lot of homework and final exams awaiting me.
And at 9:30 p.m., I plan to meet with graduate school team members and have a group study via Zoom.
>> Correct
OR:
>> Later, at 9:30 p.m., I intend to convene with my graduate school peers for a collaborative study session over Zoom.
So, I will spend all day preparing research for the zoom meeting.
>> Correct
OR:
>> I anticipate dedicating the entire day to researching and preparing for our Zoom meeting.

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