What activities disrupt a healthy lifestyle?
학생이 쓴 원문
eating at late time can cause your healthy worse.
Many people eat nutriant excessively.
We need to decrease eating.
강사 첨삭
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eating at late time can cause your healthy worse.
>> Eating late at night can negatively affect your health.
Many people eat nutriant excessively.
>> Many people consume too many nutrients.
We need to decrease eating.
>> We need to reduce our food intake.
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