What activities do you enjoy doing during the summer season?
학생이 쓴 원문
What activities do you enjoy doing during the summer season?
=> I learn exercise that I want to do while summer vacation to diet.
I have ever been jumping, swimming, hels, joging and walk with my pet.
I want to do activity that strerch my body like yoga and pillates this summer vacation but yoga and pillates is so expensive, I learn at the home as youtube.
—> 나는 여름에 다이어트를 하기 위해 하고 싶은 운동들을 골라서 여름방학 동안 배운다.
나는 지금까지 점핑,수영,헬스 ,조깅,강아지와 새벽 산책 등을 해 봤다
이번 여름 방학때는 요가나 필라테스같은 몸을 유연하게 해 주는 활동을 해 보고 싶다 하지만 요가나 필라테스는 너무 비싸서 집에서 유트브로 따라해야 겠다고 생각하고 있다
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Good day, So [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best. Keep it up!
~ T. Camille
=> I learn exercise that I want to do while summer vacation to diet.
>> I learn exercise that I want to do on summer summer vacation to lose weight.
I have ever been jumping, swimming, hels, joging and walk with my pet.
I have ever been jumping, swimming, hels, joging and walk with my pet.
>> I do jumping, swimming, jogging, and walking with my pet.
I want to do activity that strerch my body like yoga and pillates this summer vacation but yoga and pillates is so expensive, I learn at the home as youtube.
>> I want to do activities that stretch my body like yoga and Pilates this summer vacation, but yoga and Pilates are so expensive, so I learn at home through YouTube.
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