What activities do you enjoy doing on your free time?
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Topic: What activities do you enjoy in your free time?
Wow! It\'s finally free time! A lot of people do various kinds of things in their free time. I enjoy Pokemon Go, reading books, watch TV in my free time.
First, I like to do Pokemon Go. When I catch pokemon and battle, I feel very unstressful.
Secondly, I like to read books in my free time. I especially like to read science books.
Lastly, I like to watch TV. I usually watch Running man, Knowing bros, etc.
So, if I do activities that like in my free time, I feel very un stressful, and make me study well. So
make sure to get free time and not just study!
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Wow! It\'s finally free time!
>> CORRECT!A lot of people do various kinds of things in their free time.
>> CORRECT!I enjoy Pokemon Go, reading books, watch TV in my free time.
>> I enjoy Pokemon Go, reading books, and watching TV in my free time.
First, I like to do Pokemon Go.
>> CORRECT!When I catch pokemon and battle, I feel very unstressful.
>> When I catch pokemon and do battles, I don\'t feel stressed.
Secondly, I like to read books in my free time.
>> CORRECT!I especially like to read science books.
>> CORRECT!
Lastly, I like to watch TV.
>> CORRECT!I usually watch Running man, Knowing bros, etc.
>> CORRECT!
So, if I do activities that like in my free time, I feel very un stressful, and make me study well.
>> So, if I do activities like those in my free time, I don\'t feel stressed, and it makes me study well.
So make sure to get free time and not just study!
>> CORRECT!
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