What activities do you enjoy doing on your free time?
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When I was a student at high school, I used to play basketball at lunch break time. But not anymore. Now, I love to play bowling with my friends during the free time, and it could get me excited. In far future, I want to try to do extreme activities that are bungee jumping, sky diving and a snorkel abroad. Thanks for taking you time to me.
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleWhen I was a student at high school, I used to play basketball at lunch break time.
>> When I was a high school student , I used to play basketball at lunch break time.
But not anymore.
>> CORRECT!
Now, I love to play bowling with my friends during the free time, and it could get me excited.
>> CORRECT! In far future, I want to try to do extreme activities that are bungee jumping, sky diving and a snorkel abroad.
>> In far future, I want to try doing extreme activities such as bungee jumping, sky diving, and snorkeling abroad.
Thanks for taking you time to me.
>> Thanks for taking your time with me.
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