What activities do you enjoy doing when you are traveling?

2020-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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There are 8 couples in table tennis club and we have been gotten outdoor activities for 13years. Whenever we go out to eat with couples, we usually have been choosing and eating seafoods. When we find a good resturant on our walking street, we are negotiating the price and menu of the sea food. and then, we straightly go to our place and ready to talk and eat. It was happened on a regular basis by leader through SNS information.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ethan!

Thank you for sharing your answer to me.
I bet that it\'s really fun to enjoy things you like with people whom you are close with.
It\'s really nice. ^^

~Teacher Gina


There are 8 couples in table tennis club and we have been gotten outdoor activities for 13years. 
>> There are 8 couples in table tennis club and we have been doing outdoor activities for 13 years. 
Whenever we go out to eat with couples, we usually have been choosing and eating seafoods.
>> CORRECT.
When we find a good resturant on our walking street, we are negotiating the price and menu of the sea food. and then, we straightly go to our place and ready to talk and eat. 
>> When we find a good restaurant while walking on our street, we are negotiating the price and menu of the sea food and then, we straightly go to our place and get ready to talk and eat. 
It was happened on a regular basis by leader through SNS information.
>> It happened on a regular basis because of the leader through SNS information.

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