What activities do you enjoy doing with your younger sister?
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I play with my younger sister, I go academies with my youger sister and I go playground with my younger sister.
I play many games and toies.
And I go tacwondo and piano academy with my younger sister.
Lastly, I like to go the playgrond with my younger sister.
I usally fight with my sister to.
These activities are the I enjoy do with my younger sister.
But I don\'t enjoy go to academies with my sister.
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I play with my younger sister, I go academies with my youger sister and I go playground with my younger sister.
>> I play with my younger sister, I go to academies with my youger sister, and I go to the playground with my younger sister.
I play many games and toies.
>> I play many games and toys.
And I go tacwondo and piano academy with my younger sister.
>> And I go taekwondo and piano academy with my younger sister.
Lastly, I like to go to the playgrond with my younger sister.
>> CORRECT!
I usally fight with my sister to.
>> I usally fight with my sister, too.
These activities are the I enjoy do with my younger sister.
>> These are the activities I enjoy doing with my younger sister.
But I don\'t enjoy go to academies with my sister.
>> But I don\'t enjoy going to academies with my sister.
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