What activities do you like doing in nice weather?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually ride a bike in nice weather. Nowadays i’m so busy so I can’t ride a bike often. but when i was young when it’s a sunny day, I usually rode a bike with my family.
강사 첨삭
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I usually ride a bike in nice weather. Nowadays i’m so busy so I can’t
ride a bike often. but when i was young when it’s a sunny day, I usually
rode a bike with my family.
>> I usually ride a bike on a nice weather. Nowadays, I’m so busy that I can’t
ride a bike often. But when i was young and it’s a sunny day, I usually
ride a bike with my family.
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