What activities do you like to do in autumn?
학생이 쓴 원문
I love walking on the autumn.
I also like playing in everywhere because the weather is not cold but also it\'s not so hot so I like the weather when it is autumn.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
You almost got everything correctly.
We\'ll have more exercises like this.
Thank you for your participation.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I love walking on the autumn.
>> I love walking in autumn.
I also like playing in everywhere because the weather is not cold but also it\'s not so hot so I like the weather when it is autumn.
I also like playing in everywhere because the weather is not cold but also it\'s not so hot so I like the weather when it is autumn.
>> I also like playing everywhere because the weather is not cold and it\'s not so hot so I like the weather when it is autumn.
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