What activities do you think best represent Korean culture? Why?
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Korean have unique activity on winter; making Kimchi.
Korean make Kimchi once to eat for a year.
These day this custom has been disappearing because everyone are busy and making Kimchi is troublesome.
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Korean have unique activity on winter; making Kimchi.
>> Koreans have a unique winter tradition called kimchi-making.
Korean make Kimchi once to eat for a year.
>> They make a large amount of kimchi to eat throughout the year.
These day this custom has been disappearing because everyone are busy and making Kimchi is troublesome.
>> These days, this tradition has been disappearing because people are busy and making kimchi is time-consuming and troublesome.
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